I think these photos look good with the blurred edges. Adds a "secret garden" feel. If I could say anything constructive, it would be just be more subtle with the filters. other than that good work.
All of the pictures look great. I love the filters and artist rendering. THe garden one with the path looks very pretty with the colors and the composition.
I really like the one with the flower pots. I think it works really well because the broom doesn't look so cut out. It feels more cohesive than some of the others so the painterly quality makes it really dreamy.
Very creative way to approach this assignment. The idea of using a broom as a character gives this story and these pictures a fun fantasy feeling to them.
Watch your use of focus. While you do focus on the broom, you are now allowing your viewer to focus on anything else.
The story might be strengthened by more character development and an over arching idea/theme binding the events together.
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I think these photos look good with the blurred edges. Adds a "secret garden" feel. If I could say anything constructive, it would be just be more subtle with the filters. other than that good work.
All of the pictures look great. I love the filters and artist rendering. THe garden one with the path looks very pretty with the colors and the composition.
i think you were successful in making the broom's story seem like a children's book with the background filters.
I really like the one with the flower pots. I think it works really well because the broom doesn't look so cut out. It feels more cohesive than some of the others so the painterly quality makes it really dreamy.
the consistency of the broom in each piece is a nice form of repetition.
Very creative way to approach this assignment. The idea of using a broom as a character gives this story and these pictures a fun fantasy feeling to them.
Watch your use of focus. While you do focus on the broom, you are now allowing your viewer to focus on anything else.
The story might be strengthened by more character development and an over arching idea/theme binding the events together.
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